Monday, April 23, 2007
Short Story
My short story is titled "My No-Research Paper". I called it this because my story is really just a follow up to my research paper. I wrote my research paper on World War Two, and major mistakes that Hitler made that eventually caused him to lose the war. He changed his strategy in the Battle of Britain, and had all of his bombers bomb London instead of military targets. He halted his troops before they could engage Allied troops at Dunkirk, and he invaded the Soviet Union. Most of the mistakes that I analyzed I incorporated into my short story. My short story was mostly about what could have happened, and what I think may have happened if Hitler went about these decisions differently. It's really impossible to say what would have happened, but I think that my short story is a very scary possibility. It's probably pretty boring if you aren't really interested in military history, so I'm sorry to whoever has to read it. Hope you like it though.
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I'm not that much of a military buff, but I did think your paper was very interesting and imformative. Since this isn't fiction I would have to say your characters about pretty believable seeing is how they are real people. I like how you state what could have happened in the way if Hitler made different decisions. It makes people think of different outcomes. Your story is based on real events so I would describe the setting from a realistic view point. THere was however parts that I got confused at because I really don't know what your talking about, but I'm sure it's all right and used properly. I think the part about Jewish people is very surprising and I wouldn't have thought that. Overall your paper was well written. The ending seemed to kind of just end, with no preparation for it. Your title goes along well with the paper and clever how you chose to write about research paper, when the assignment wasn't like ur research. Great job!
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